The first round is over and voting is in… here is my entry:
MOTION
As he was writing his bio, Larry could not decide whether his penis resembled a rumbling locomotive or a fine-tuned engine, both could apply.
Here was the assignment as instructed by Marie A. Rebelle, in charge of all things pertaining to the Smut Marathon…
Write an erotic metaphor… specific requirements:
– only one sentence
– give your word a one-word title
– your metaphor is a maximum of 30 words (excluding title)
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Of course, I thought my entry was the cleverest and most original, but I wasn’t the darling of the judges, as apparently I don’t know the difference between a metaphor and a fucking simile. Thanks to those who gave me a vote. I’m coming back with a vengeance for Round Two. Check here to see what my fellow writers are saying about the Smut Marathon.
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Rock on Elliott 😉
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You two, May, I thought ours were the best! Oh, and Posy and L Lucy’s too. And, of course who could forget our old friend Cousin Pons… who finished near the top, wouldn’t you know it?
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Great to see your spirit for the second round 🙂
Rebel xox
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